Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Individuals are inclined to thrive in life by doing whatever they can. This objective can be attained by performing ordinary task that an individual is good a them, or taking risks and challenging oneself to broaden the range of success that a person can achieve. Some people prefer to stick to the areas they are good at, and some people enjoy facing new challenges and trying new things. I am of the opinion that the road to success initiates from an intrinsic motivation to taking risks and overcoming the challenges of trying new things.
First, successful people engage in risky activities, and getting good results from these areas increases the confidence and self-satisfaction in them. After a while, conducting tasks that we know how to do well can be boring, and people tend to try new things. If they achieve success in this new area, their self-confidence as long as their self-satisfaction wil escalate, ensuring them with happier attitude towards themselves, and mitigation in the negative feelings. For instance, I have an undergraduate degree in Urban Planning, and I was afraid to give up this major, because I did not see enough potential in myself to perform well in other majors. I wanted to study business from an early age but I guess I was not brave enough to try it. The day came that i opted to study business in masters, and I started studying the difficult courses I have not taught in undergradute. After a year I was admitted to one of the best business school, and I could not be happier because I tried hard for getting there, and i was satisfied with my effory. Changing major is really challenging, but by doing that, my self-confidence level increased, and I am happier now than I was before.
Second, successful people can achieve more rewards and success by taking risks, rather than to sticking to old unconventional activities. As these people expand their range of activities, there is always a possibility that these people act properly in the new context by using their experience from their former area, so they are prone to achieving success, and culminating in this new area. For example, Elon Musk is one of the leaders of technology in contemporary world, and his fame was first spread out from his successful company, that is MySpace. He did not give up his ambitious desire to face new challenges, and established various companies with different functions. His most known company, Tesla, is currently one of the best companies in the world. Although he has thrived in these contexts, he was not satisfied, and started expanding his activities into space exploration program. His last corporation, SpaceX, is now the world's leader private company in space industry, and he is getting richer and more successful everyday. So I think we should all learn from his ambitious behavior to conform challenges in order to becoming more successful.
Finally, it is better for famous successful people to try new things, so they get to evaluate themselves in this new area. Thriving in this new contexts can advantage them with more rewards, success, confidence, positive feeling, etc. Consequently, I think that taking risks is a perquisite for achieving success in the first place, and this approves the need for maintaining this valiant action towards other areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'them'?
Suggestion: a; them
...rdinary task that an individual is good a them, or taking risks and challenging onesel...
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Line 2, column 766, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ave enough to try it. The day came that i opted to study business in masters, and...
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Line 2, column 1019, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...use I tried hard for getting there, and i was satisfied with my effory. Changing ...
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Line 3, column 937, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...is last corporation, SpaceX, is now the worlds leader private company in space industr...
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Line 3, column 1031, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e is getting richer and more successful everyday. So I think we should all learn from hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, really, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i guess, i think, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2756.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 555.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96576576577 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89382271149 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497297297297 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 852.3 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 17.0 1.86738351254 910% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2086305127 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.826086957 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1304347826 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86956521739 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210059144337 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652183912544 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574783700773 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136226566647 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320477580077 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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