Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education?Or it is the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
It is argued that,for supporting people,who have got limited financial means and they have got some primary needs namely lack of refreshments and education system,whether the part of the prosperity of affluent countries ought to be allocated to them , or it is the direct governments' responsibility of each needy country to fulfill their residents' demand,which is essential for living a life.Looking from my prospective,I would say that both the amount of prosperous countries' affluence and having responsible governmental system are certainly needed to provide initial facilities for these needy people.
Obviously,while There are some developed and rich countries with satisfying level of financial system,there are some developing nations,that are unable to even support their minimum needs.In my view point,some fixed financial plans should be designed by some international communities carrying the subject of moral duty,which is directly suggest the annual amount of money ,that can be allocated by first-world counties to third-world nations to cover their vital needs.This idea should be widespread universally to end poverty in these poor countries.In fact the annual cost according to these fixed plans is a little amount of money,however when the total money is collected it would be a remarkable amount which can admittedly be at the help of poor nations providing food,warmth and shelter for their people.
Granted the fact that ,the part of wealthy countries' affluence should allocate to these poor counties,the government of each needy country have to be responsible to enhance their native situation to a more convenient one .For sure,there are a number of effective ways,that governments can perform to alter their unpleasant situation such as taking out mortgage from other wealthy countries then provide some jobs to end this privation.Moreover,it is no need that governing bodies are paid high salary in this condition,in other words decreasing the amount of salary,which is paid to these workers in governments,and allocating this money to increase manufacturing and tourism than can boost the economy so as to construct schools,colleges or universities for poor people would be a productive technique .
By way of conclusion,financial support the fundamental needs of needy people in poor nations is an imperative issue,which ought to be look after by both superior countries and governments of each inferior nations.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60589812332 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4327924493 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554959785523 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 93.0 20.2975951904 458% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 242.178136916 49.4020404114 490% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 522.75 106.682146367 490% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 93.25 20.7667163134 449% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.75 7.06120827912 393% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202475374277 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127733611751 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289323360209 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127733611751 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289323360209 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.6 13.0946893788 394% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -31.38 50.2224549098 -62% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.7 11.3001002004 360% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.44 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.08 8.58950901804 152% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.2 10.1190380762 387% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 10.7795591182 482% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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