Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought that the leading technique for some unfavorable conditions such as job dissatisfaction or scarcity of money, would be just go along with it, others on the contrary, harshly critique the former belief as they are of the opinion that it is far more greater to make effort besides develop this current state. To follow the later opinion, I would believe Depending on how much any people put effort, there are undoubtedly countless ways to evolve any undesirable conditions.
First, let me put a light on the ideology of just welcome the unpleasant situations like as, being unsatisfied with your career, without making any efforts. I strongly believe that if human think that some negative aspects of life such as, privation ,would be long with them until the end of their lives with no power existing to change this sub-standard state, losing their hope as well as considering the meaning of life pointless will be the first thing they will absolutely struggle with. Furthermore and equally importantly, highlighting the fact that people are alive definitely due to achieve their wish, if they thought that there would be no routes for reaching their desires, they might be a tired, depressed as well as bored public that could not hold any hope alight in their hearts. What is more, I genuinely understand that some people are facing some difficulties making ends meet, consequently they are living from hand to mouth specially in third-world countries, nevertheless, I would argue that welcoming all these adverse points without trying for a change, would be a huge mistake to make for these people, what I hold as a belief is as a human we've got some rights, that should be never ignored even by ourselves.
Now we will hurtle towards the latter opinion which is, making effort or evolving some dissatisfied states such as having limited financial means, would be a more suitable solution to these situations. I would support this view point strongly as I believe there are some productive techniques that they can be applied to our life for a better change. It is apparent that if we want to see any positive advancements in our lives, we should try hard for that depending on our purpose to fulfill. For instance, every year the number of successful African runners, which is reported by news has been sharply increasing. To clear things up these runners from Africa ,that is an inferior country with limited financial means, are super great and their success relies on a simple answer that is putting lots of effort in what they want as an aim of their lives, they did not accept their unpleasant situations, they wanted to change it and they did. Thus, considering our abilities and try for a better life it is not impossible for anyone who are making effort for fulfilling their desires.
By way of conclusion, people hold varied opinion about whether accepting the unpleasant situations such as poverty or enhancing these situations to a better one, I would support the latter belief as I am of the opinion that we as a human have all the abilities to change any nuisance states to a finer one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, third, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 24.0651302605 291% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2593.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 534.0 315.596192385 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85580524345 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64203010037 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511235955056 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 805.5 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.7674933947 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.461538462 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0769230769 20.7667163134 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161782526713 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639436155312 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511032627153 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124181780344 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469047649212 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.0946893788 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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