You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr. Allen,
I am writing in connection with a request for my leave application. I would like to utilize my unused privileged leaves which have been accumulated since April for a two and half week break in November.
I have recently been informed that my younger sister has fixed a date for her weding. Since she lives in Mumbai, I will have to travel to India for the functions. The ceremony will take place on a small island called Alibug, which is not only a famous destination for wedings, but also very close to the city. As the elder sister, I will have a number of roles and responsibilities to fulfil and therefore will have to be around for a longer period of time.
The celebrations start from the 5th and will continue till 15th of the month. I will, hence, need to reach there a few days eariler to help with the arrangements. So, I would like to go on leave from the start of the month till 16th November.
I would like to imform you that although I will be away, I will be carrying my laptop with me for urgent work. Additionally, I have involved my assistant in the recent developments so that it does not lead to any interuptions at work. I assure you my absence will not affect the product launch which is planned for mid December.
I look forward to receiving your positive revert
Yours Sincerely
Karishma Dave
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Allen, I am writing in connection with a reques...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a two and half week break in November. I have recently been informed that my yo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... half week break in November. I have recently been informed that my you...
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Line 9, column 443, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ore will have to be around for a longer period of time. The celebrations start from ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be around for a longer period of time. The celebrations start from the 5th and...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The celebrations start from the 5th and will continue till 15th of the month...
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Line 13, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... start of the month till 16th November. I would like to imform you that although...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which is planned for mid December. I look forward to receiving your positiv...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orward to receiving your positive revert Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positive revert Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^^^^
Line 27, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63265306122 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62616190743 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595918367347 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0415040099 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128572754442 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443685706002 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404874744558 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637731396351 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396317702661 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Allen, I am writing in connection with a reques...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a two and half week break in November. I have recently been informed that my yo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... half week break in November. I have recently been informed that my you...
^
Line 9, column 443, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ore will have to be around for a longer period of time. The celebrations start from ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be around for a longer period of time. The celebrations start from the 5th and...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The celebrations start from the 5th and will continue till 15th of the month...
^^
Line 13, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... start of the month till 16th November. I would like to imform you that although...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which is planned for mid December. I look forward to receiving your positiv...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orward to receiving your positive revert Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positive revert Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^^^^
Line 27, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63265306122 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62616190743 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595918367347 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0415040099 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128572754442 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443685706002 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404874744558 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637731396351 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396317702661 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.