The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The above diagram gives information about the diversity in numbers of Australian men and women in 6 age stages who exercised consistently in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the only portion which quantity of males were higher than females was for under 25 years old, otherwise, women trained more after turning 25.
Under the age 25, men allocated almost more than half percentage for themselves with 52.8 which was the greatest proportion for men in the whole graph. Between 25 to 34 year olds women had near 49% and men with 42%. Until 44 years old, women rates increased noticeably to 52.5 which made male proportion the lowest percentage in the chart with 39.5%.
In fourth section, for 45 to 54 year olds, women records hit a peak with 53.3% and then had a slight decline in the next group to 53%. Finally, although both women and men statistics were really close to each other in the final category, just by small difference of 0.4 percentage, women had bigger proportion of 47.1.
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- In developed countries one of the debating issue for students is to take a gap between their highschool and college Although some believe they should take a break some believe they should start to study right after they finish their highschool I think it 56
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- Is technology time consuming or does it save time 78
- the first graph indicates the highest level of education of women in someland in 1945 and the other one gives information about the same topic but in 1955 78
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, really, then, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75144508671 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42430254052 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3258880617 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21412812962 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102692070406 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607811343351 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130818115609 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739555874241 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.