In many country, plastic containers have become more popular than ever. They are used in many businesses such as food drink industry
Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
It is argued that nowadays, in many nations specifically in many companies producing food and drink that containers made from plastic are popularly used. In this essay, I will discuss both the merits and the demerits of this upward tendency in manufacturing packaging industry.
There is no denying that packaging food and drink by plastic is convenient for both companies producing them and the customers using them actually. First of all, the fact that plastic containers compare with paper packaging, is a much more inexpensive resource. Secondly, because customers’ demands in reusing, companies tend to prefer using plastic in manufacturing food and drink’s containers. For example, my parents have been using Herbarlife which is a healthy food for every meal especially breakfast for 8 years. Thus, this is the reason why there are many empty plastic boxes left; however, my mother likes recycling them by filling them up with salt, pepper, flour ... in order to preserve these cooking ingredients. As the result, plastic containers totally help people a lots in saving money.
However, the drawback that there are many researches about the harmfulness of plastic should also be seriously taken into consideration. As the social media reports, we are aware of the dangerous effects caused by plastic to environment and animals’ habitat especially underwater. For instance, a plastic containers may take five hundred years to be extremely destroyed and animals significantly submarines are dying out as the consequence of their throats sticking with plastic bottles, plastic bags... This negativity actively illustrates that tendency of plastic use is the key factor influencing the nature.
To sum up everything that has been stated, it is my personal opinion that despite plastic packaging bring people benefit of convenience, its distinct weakness in damaging the ecosystem and polluting animals’s home can’t be settled down by any benefit.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49834983498 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90455869606 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3536472951 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241737820898 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814902350895 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566323339495 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14289333999 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709499973362 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.