Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that modern children are capable of reading books or watching TV programs all by themselves. While some argue that there is no need for parents to keep reading books or telling stories to their children, I strongly disagree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, there is an uncertainty that children can read correctly and effectively by themselves. With thousands of books and TV programs existing, they may find it difficult to choose the right kinds of books or programs to enjoy while they also have to identify and stay away the toxic or misleading materials. For example, the children can be easily attracted by an exciting short movie which imply a cruel message about racist hidden behind stunning actors and colorful set of the movie, so they innocently learn the wrong way of treating people in the society. Besides, when children read or watch TV on their own, they only choose some aspects they want to experience or their solely aim is for enjoyment rather than learning so the educational motivation is lack.
On the other hand, when fathers or mothers read for their children, they always make sure to choose the appropriate stories which are helpful for the children’s development. Not only do parents shape the personality of the children from very early period of their childhood but they can also encourage the children to express their own viewpoint on many aspects of life which is mentioned in the stories. This cannot be achieved if the children read books or watch TV on their own as they would keep every thoughts in their mind and have no intention of telling others how they see things. Moreover, with the less and less time parents can spend with their children nowadays, the moment when they tell the children stories can strengthen the family relationship which can help widen the children’s knowledge as well as build up their mental strength.
In conclusion, although the children can be smart enough to read books or watch TV program on their own, parents should not drop telling them stories so that they both can benefit.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88101983003 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51956527964 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521246458924 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8974012553 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.636363636 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0909090909 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2727272727 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350155072217 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171764849974 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778070037377 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276222142366 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684080801581 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88101983003 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51956527964 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521246458924 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8974012553 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.636363636 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0909090909 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2727272727 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350155072217 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171764849974 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778070037377 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276222142366 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684080801581 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.