Today, advanced science and technology have made great changes to people’s life, but artists such as musicians, painters and writers are still highly valued. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
With the unprecedented development of science and technology, a variety of occupations have been pushed to the verge of disappearing. However, such professions related to art as musicians or artists are still held in high regard. This essay will discuss some possible potential of art that advanced machines or science cannot have.
First of all, the most important part of humans’ life that technology and science can never convey is our emotions. Humans have a wide range of feelings depending on the events we are experiencing. For example, a mother cries happy tears when giving birth to her child, a daughter bursts out into tears when facing the death of her father. Artists including musicians or poets can easily succeed in delivering such emotions to audiences through their artwork with their outstanding talent and skills. Audiences can feel that they are empathized with just by watching or observing the piece of art. Machines, on the other hand, are incapable of doing that since they do not have experiences and the ability to feel anything around them as humans.
Another significance of art compared to technology is that art reflects the reality. For example, a singer can easily talk about social issues happening in the world right at the moment by writing a song about those and also voices his own opinions about the issue in the song. Additionally, every piece of art is created containing the personal and distinguished perspectives and outlooks on the world of the artist. How the artist sees and feels the world around him is clearly illustrated in his art. Thus, thousands of artwork gives society a multitude of viewpoints on the world we are living in right now, which can be of great importance to the development of humankind and the society as a whole.
Last but not least, art plays its most crucial role in recording history and anticipating the future of humankind. It is obvious that a long time ago, our ancestors did not have any kinds of technology to express their ideas so they used various types of art such as carving, embroidering or wall painting to pass down their knowledge to later generations. Moreover, it is significant to acknowledge that some artwork from the Middle Age even had very similar scenarios of how our modern world looks like.
In conclusion, I believe that no matter how advanced technology and science can be, art will always find its way to exist in humans’ life because of its undeniable importance and possibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eniable importance and possibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96420047733 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78988119746 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570405727924 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8940109839 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.555555556 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2777777778 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282405601818 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810993989283 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638047868412 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15512645097 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616033492431 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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