The diagrams below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ad make comparisons where relevant
The pictures illustrates the comparison between two different ways of collecting water cultivation purposes by swing basket with ropes and bucket technique.
First of all, picture A indicates the swing basket process. Two people stand near the water source which has a depth of about 1-2 meters.Next , they also hold the ropes connecting with the basket made of bamboo or leather.Besides,the farmers will hold the ends of them to lower the basket down to scoop water.After the basket is filled with water,two peasants will pull it up and swing it over to the irrigation channel to the arable lands.
Moving to the rope and bucket technique, it is more complicated than the swing basket method. This technique requires such great strengths from animals such as cows, buffaloes,...as well as main usage of many tools such as slope, bucket, pulley, rollers.To begin with, an ox, standing near a well which had already been digged to the depths under 50 meters, is attached to the pulley.The second step is when the ox walks downhill, the rollers will turn.It leads to the bucket will be pulled up and the irrigation channels will be poured by water.
Both of two manners use same technique like force to cultivate fields and both have simple stage. However,there are differences between two of them like the depth of water,the implementers and tools, which also show highly intelligent methods that people in rural area use to tackle the collecting water problem for irrigation purposes without motorized equipments
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- The diagrams below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ad make comparisons where relevant 78
- The diagrams below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ad make comparisons where relevant 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, second, so, well, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09236947791 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77676070269 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618473895582 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.738236229 43.030603864 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.142857143 112.824112599 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5714285714 22.9334400587 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4285714286 5.23603664747 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162183559153 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786012678585 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700129989456 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113669581997 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526423296035 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.