Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the media has an important role in our life. Therefore, it is believed that people who have an influence on the press also can affect others’ thoughts and behaviours. However, to my mind, it is not these company’s masters but the consumers, that is us, who have effect on our own mind and act whatever the media does.
Firstly, let me give you two reasons why mass communication can not totally affect us. Newspapers, as the first media, appeared in fifteenth century, which means the media has a long history. However, we haven’t seen any controls from the bosses of these types of media until now. So that, it is not true if we assume they are controlling us these days while we have even more equipments to do what we want. More importantly, we decide what we see or watch and what we do not. Therefore, it is proved that we are the masters of our thoughts and decisions but not the media organizations.
However, because of a large numbers of different types of media we use and a longer time we spend for these, it is easily to understand why we are affected partly by some pieces of information on the Internet or in the magazines. For example, the youth in many countries now favour the foreign celebrities such as Korean music bands or Hollywood stars even they only watch them on television or the Web. Because of that, if the consumers do not want to be negatively influenced by the media, they should have intelligent choices which they should or should not watch.
In conclusion, I personally believe that the media is only a part in our lives so the bosses of these communicative companies are unable to control the way we think or behave. However, as intelligent customers, I recommend that we understand clearly what to believe on these big and complicated platforms.
Note: Please help me to see what mark this essay can have if possible. Thank you!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'these companies'?
Suggestion: this company; these companies
...aviours. However, to my mind, it is not these company’s masters but the consumers, that is us...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'number'?
Suggestion: number
...zations. However, because of a large numbers of different types of media we use and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67065868263 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71084927468 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541916167665 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7824248685 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16763261414 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617923378641 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311960018779 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973148633477 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375909671579 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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