even though globalization affects the world's economies in very positive way its negative side should not be forgotten discuss.
Globalization is a vital problem in worldwide its directly effects to both developed countries and poor countries which has to run out on the track. Both sides have pros and cons impact on economies.
On the one hand, globalization brings a number of benefits for developed countries. Free trade makes its own business have more opportunities to cooperate with other countries that impact significantly on market, the customer has many more choices for their product, increasing competition between the stakeholder and crowded economical market. Second, Globalization will be a good mirror for those countries still in developing, not only for the economies part but also for human awareness. Finally, it reduces the unemployment rate owing to both developed countries and poor countries need high-quality skilled labor and unskilled labor. So that can partly reduce unemployed cases.
On the other hand, Globalization has some disadvantages. Firstly, losing balances between poor countries and developed countries still occur. It means we cannot change the gap between rich and developing countries. As a result, they are not hired for a wealthy job. This means they will live their life under uncomfortable circumstances and poverty. Another solution is by adopting an equitable taxation system, meaning that people are taxed within their personal income. To sum up, taxes should be invested in health, education, and social purpose.
In conclusion, this is a complicated issue, the government should take an action, in my point of view this even worsen in the near future if we don't have any action plan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Line 2, column 641, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lity skilled labor and unskilled labor. So that can partly reduce unemployed cases. On...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...is even worsen in the near future if we dont have any action plan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, as to, in conclusion, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37154150198 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9711333888 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.544726566 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957406015504 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307383803528 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320854777248 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058651497405 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130219398021 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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