Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircut and beauty product to enhance their appearance. Some people think that it is a good way to spend money while others think there are better ways to spend it. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nobody would dispute the fact that in this modern era individuals are extremely interested in grooming their personalities. Some assert that money spent on clothes, haircut and beauty items are worth and beneficial. However, others argue money can be spent on some other relevant things. Personally, I am in favor of former view.
It is evidently clear that spending money to propel one's outlook results in constructive benefit of promoting confidence in individuals. In other words, having an attractive appearance builds a sense of optimistic attitude which leads to a confident personality; therefore, this stimulates a person's capability to overcome any challenges. Moreover, people who belong to entertainment industry are required to look perfect every time, for which they have to spend abundant money on themselves. Otherwise, if they will not care about the physical looks then their goodwill may suffer.
Nevertheless, money spent on basic necessities is worth for those who have limited income. Although, caring about looks is vital, many other basic needs are there which cannot be overlooked. To exemplify, middle class person spending money on education for their children and good food is more worthy rather than splurging income in other things. Not only basic needs but money spent on buying something useful is also favorable. Subsequently, for a businessman money invested in some profitable venture substantially contribute to significant profits in future.
To conclude, both sections of people have their own credible reasons. Despite, being normal income person, people still like to spend on themselves to look better. In my profound opinion, personality grooming gives the sense of accomplishment to mines of individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tly clear that spending money to propel ones outlook results in constructive benefit...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...rsonality; therefore, this stimulates a persons capability to overcome any challenges. ...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...uffer. Nevertheless, money spent on basic necessities is worth for those who have limited inc...
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Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ially contribute to significant profits in future. To conclude, both sections of peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55970149254 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9517165981 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652985074627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5908020129 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276425197136 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818341909445 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488612557611 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159925131276 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142287320016 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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