Tourism in the United Kingdom contributes billions of pounds sterling to the Uk economy. The table below identifies the twelve most visited paid admission attractions in the Uk in 1999 and 2000.
The tabular chart vividly illustrates information about the twelve most popular tourist attractions in the United Kingdom in 1999 and 2000. Overwhelming, Victoria and Albert museum, flamingo land, theme park and zoo were grown in 2000 instead of others attractions in England.
It can be clearly seen that millennium dome and British airways London eye were most popular in 2000, which were estimated numbers 6,516,874 and 3,300,000 respectively.moreover, the percentage of visitors were increased in London and Kirkby misperton with 7.4% and 8.7% in following year. In addition to it, the Madame Tussaud's and science museum paid admission attractions were huge dropped at -9.5% and 9.8% in London.
Furthermore, Alton tower and natural history museum were got almost similar fame in England. In annexation to it, the number of visit on Tower of London attraction was from 2,428,603 to 2,303,167 between 1999 and 2000, followed by Canterbury cathedral and chessington world of adventures respectively.
All in all, maximum well known was science museum and minimum was millennium Dome.
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which were estimated numbers 6,516,874 and 3,300,000 respectively.moreover
which have estimated numbers 6,516,874 and 3,300,000 respectively.moreover
Sentence: Overwhelming, Victoria and Albert museum, flamingo land, theme park and zoo were grown in 2000 instead of others attractions in England.
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the Madame Tussaud's and science museum paid admission attractions were huge dropped at -9.5% and 9.8% in London.
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maximum well known was science museum and minimum was millennium Dome.
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