People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
It is a normal thing that people don’t want to make changes in their life because after they get used to a lifestyle that they are comfortable with, it becomes hard to make changes in their life which they assimilated.
I think once life becomes boring, and all the days are the same for a period of time, people should do some changes in their life in order to make it better. I don’t think adjusting your lifestyle is a bad thing, but a lot of people think that they should stay with their current lifestyle, and most of them are afraid to make changes.
I understand the idea that as long as you are getting good drawbacks with your current lifestyle, and it is efficient for you, then there is no needed to adjust, but perhaps you are missing some points in life while focusing on one thing. So I would say that you cannot really know which one is the most efficient, and the best way for you without trying different methods and a bit of change in your lifestyle. The best way to stop being afraid of change is to stop thinking that your lifestyle is already the best. Because a little bit of change would not do any harm. In addition, people need to understand that not all changes are meant to be in a bad way.
In conclusion, although it is hard to change their life once they adopt, people should give it a try. Whereas sometimes a very small change in your lifestyle can make a very important difference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ng, and all the days are the same for a period of time, people should do some changes in their...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t of them are afraid to make changes. I understand the idea that as long as you...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le focusing on one thing. So I would say that you cannot really know which one is...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat your lifestyle is already the best. Because a little bit of change would not do any...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ifestyle is already the best. Because a little bit of change would not do any harm. In add...
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Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd that not all changes are meant to be in a bad way. In conclusion, although it is hard t...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hey adopt, people should give it a try. Whereas sometimes a very small change in your l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, then, whereas, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37358490566 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32764432169 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471698113208 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3901532795 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182730563673 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805142858394 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335780249634 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127302097304 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262169521811 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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