Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your opinion?
I agree that young people are a lot more concerned with animal welfare, and environmental issues.
The reason is that, in the past, people were a bit less knowledged. They did not know the issues about the world as much as we do know. For example, now we can learn information about what is going on almost everywhere in the world. And old people have not grown up this way, so most of them still do not know about the abilities that we have now. What leads us to have this advantage is, nowadays we have access to the internet, social media and other technological devices. Old people used to read journals and newspapers and they waited till the new one was released, so it was taking time to access news. But today it is way easier. Newspapers and journals are available on the internet so that we can read them virtually and learn about all issues concerning animal life and green life in the world also, we can participate in some of the attempts to protect animals and the environment virtually.
Unfortunately, the majority of old people could not keep up with these developments and technology. As a result, they could not learn about animals, the environment and issues about them as much as young people do. Even if they can access the news, they do not care enough about animal and green life since, in the past, it was not even a big deal.
In conclusion, young people care more about these issues while old people are not educated enough to think these issues are important. Nevertheless, some old people do not even have access to some of these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 833, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...n the world also, we can participate in some of the attempts to protect animals and the env...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59574468085 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49943406904 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475177304965 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0286420334 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235257548162 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901115097765 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791312648386 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17220332596 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262062411104 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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