People Now a days live longer than they used to. What caused this situation? Is it a negative or positive development?
In most of the countries, now life span of certain person is increased. The awareness of fitness in the people led a healthy lifestyle in them. This development is positive due to people can live longer.
On one hand, nowadays people are fitness freaks. For the development of their muscles lots of people are going into gyms to do different types of workout. Before people could not live longer cholesterol, more body fat, lack of vitamins etc. People are now eating healthy diets to prevent these types of negative developments in their bodies. More and more people are now conscious about theirs and their surrounding lives who are supported by them. For example in India 50% more people are taking more care of their body fitness.
On the other hand, advancement in the medical field is exponential. Medical society has almost every cure for any type of diseases, like recent threat of COVID-19 all medical professionals are working tirelessly for the vaccine of it but in the meantime they found solution of immunity and vitamin for prevention of this virus. The long term diseases like high blood-pressure, low blood-pressure, diabetes, thyroid were threatful in order to live longer, but now due to medicines we can live a long healthy life. Now people can transplant another person's heart, eyes, liver etc. for longer life. This is the difference between before and current medical science.
To conclude the essay, the need of a longer life in people made them aware of the fitness and healthy diet in their lives and the improvements in the medical science.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...life. Now people can transplant another persons heart, eyes, liver etc. for longer life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65324618819 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.988684241 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25916363434 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965445202753 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858362347391 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171649810909 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612123624822 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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