People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Our mother earth is home for culturally and ethnically diverse humans separated by nations and religions but united by humanity. Currently there is a contentious argument over whether the people around the world are more similar then the differences that divide us? I totally agree that the similarities outweigh the various differences separating us.
Beyond any qualms there a myriads of logical reasons that prove that our global community identical. As humans we all need love, hope, compassion, dreams, confidence and support to survive on this planet. Our human desires such as need for care and humbleness along with social approval is what that unites us. When two souls are connected on a cognitive level and their intellectual frequencies make them hold hands together then the racial and cultural differences are thrown out of the window. For example, there are millions of couples around the world who found their soul mate to be from a totally different culture and ethnicity. This clearly indicates that we are more similar than the boundaries that divide us.
On the contrary some people believe that the cultural differences cause a shift in the personality type. They stereotype certain religions such as Muslims and outcast them as terrorists. For example, after nine eleven attack on twin towers in USA thousands of innocent Muslims were killed for no reason. However, I believe that humanity always wins in the end. Would it be right to blame a whole community for the deeds of a small minority group? I strongly disagree!
In conclusion, I believe that sometime uneducated people from certain cultural groups try to spread hatred by involving in terrorism. However, most of the people are alike in terms of emotional bonding as well as morals and values.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...eople around the world are more similar then the differences that divide us? I total...
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Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a myriad' or simply 'myriads'?
Suggestion: a myriad; myriads
...separating us. Beyond any qualms there a myriads of logical reasons that prove that our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12027491409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66096567062 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.357751733 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190157811321 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580793173474 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658954458188 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107909376417 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545507103495 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.