The city council of Town X has proposed reducing the city’s electric expenses by switching all the lights in public buildings from incandescent bulbs to light-emitting diodes (LEDs). The switch would be made gradually as the old incandescent bulbs burn out, and the city council reasons that since LED lights burn brighter and cost no more to purchase, the switch would help Town X save money on electrical costs in the future. Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to help evaluate the efficacy of the city council’s proposal to save money on electrical costs.
It is elucidated by the argument that by replacing the incandescent bulbs to the light emiting diodes , not only would the town x benefit in regards to saving cost to purchase but also improve the overall expenditure on the electric costs, since it is stated that these leds tend to be luminant enough, but the these assertions made seem to be partial and there is a needs to access myriad varaibles before maing these claims thus making the argument rife with holes and skeptical in nature.
One of the issue to which the argument perspicously is has not covered is that the new installations of the light emitted diodes would suffice with the retrogade fittings of the incandescent bulbs.Is there any data or study which proves to show that the shift can lead to added benefits? There are drawbacks associated with the light emitting diodes too which needs to weighed before making a reckless decisioon of formulating to be a part of the whole town.The point which is not drawn into the limelight by the argument is that how effective is the new bulbs in order to minimize the elctrical cost.Is there any old electrical data to draw comparisons or any kind of represntation of data to prove the validity of the argument.Another loop hole in the argument is that what about the other eco-friendly ans well cost effective bulbs in the market , do they bear a chance in comaprison with the light emitting diodes.
Next, the second quality of the light emiited diodes being bright, this revealations makes the argument subject which is bereft of a staunch foundation, it seems that the brightness level needs to be meticuously evaluated since it can be one of the leding concern since the bright lights can cause health related illness like migraine, increase headaches in debitilated or immunocompromised patietns, if they were to be installed in hospital, their requirement would be perilous in nature .
In nutshell, there is a need to suject the argument to plethora of variables before making such claims,It would not be pragamtic enough to switch to the changes in a the town in a go without scrutinizing in depth details about it .Thus, there is a need to establish validity as well the ideas need more exploration , without which the assumptions made cannot be satiated.
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- TOEFL T P O 32 Integrated Writing Task 3
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...escent bulbs to the light emiting diodes , not only would the town x benefit in re...
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Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...des , not only would the town x benefit in regards to saving cost to purchase but also improv...
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Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e assertions made seem to be partial and there is a needs to access myriad varaib...
^^
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a needs'?
Suggestion: there are a needs
...assertions made seem to be partial and there is a needs to access myriad varaibles before maing...
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Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue to which the argument perspicously is has not covered is that the new installa...
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Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Is
...gade fittings of the incandescent bulbs.Is there any data or study which proves to...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...mulating to be a part of the whole town.The point which is not drawn into the limel...
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Line 2, column 602, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Is
...in order to minimize the elctrical cost.Is there any old electrical data to draw c...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...a to prove the validity of the argument.Another loop hole in the argument is that what ...
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Line 2, column 849, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... well cost effective bulbs in the market , do they bear a chance in comaprison wit...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... requirement would be perilous in nature . In nutshell, there is a need to suject...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , It
...a of variables before making such claims,It would not be pragamtic enough to switch...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...amtic enough to switch to the changes in a the town in a go without scrutinizing ...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...tic enough to switch to the changes in a the town in a go without scrutinizing in de...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t scrutinizing in depth details about it .Thus, there is a need to establish valid...
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Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...scrutinizing in depth details about it .Thus, there is a need to establish validity ...
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Line 4, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... as well the ideas need more exploration , without which the assumptions made cann...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, thus, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 55.5748502994 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 387.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88630490956 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82333249248 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519379844961 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 22.8473053892 337% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.614921858 57.8364921388 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 378.2 119.503703932 316% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.4 23.324526521 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.70786347227 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229362593882 0.218282227539 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127223639932 0.0743258471296 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343848391476 0.0701772020484 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136413914377 0.128457276422 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403802472411 0.0628817314937 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.3 14.3799401198 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 48.3550499002 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.1 12.197005988 263% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.32208582834 135% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 12.3882235529 222% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 11.1389221557 294% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 11.9071856287 277% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...escent bulbs to the light emiting diodes , not only would the town x benefit in re...
^^
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...des , not only would the town x benefit in regards to saving cost to purchase but also improv...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e assertions made seem to be partial and there is a needs to access myriad varaib...
^^
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a needs'?
Suggestion: there are a needs
...assertions made seem to be partial and there is a needs to access myriad varaibles before maing...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue to which the argument perspicously is has not covered is that the new installa...
^^
Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Is
...gade fittings of the incandescent bulbs.Is there any data or study which proves to...
^^
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...mulating to be a part of the whole town.The point which is not drawn into the limel...
^^^
Line 2, column 602, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Is
...in order to minimize the elctrical cost.Is there any old electrical data to draw c...
^^
Line 2, column 730, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...a to prove the validity of the argument.Another loop hole in the argument is that what ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 849, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... well cost effective bulbs in the market , do they bear a chance in comaprison wit...
^^
Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... requirement would be perilous in nature . In nutshell, there is a need to suject...
^^
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , It
...a of variables before making such claims,It would not be pragamtic enough to switch...
^^^
Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...amtic enough to switch to the changes in a the town in a go without scrutinizing ...
^^
Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...tic enough to switch to the changes in a the town in a go without scrutinizing in de...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t scrutinizing in depth details about it .Thus, there is a need to establish valid...
^^
Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...scrutinizing in depth details about it .Thus, there is a need to establish validity ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... as well the ideas need more exploration , without which the assumptions made cann...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, thus, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 55.5748502994 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 387.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88630490956 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82333249248 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519379844961 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 22.8473053892 337% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.614921858 57.8364921388 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 378.2 119.503703932 316% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.4 23.324526521 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.70786347227 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229362593882 0.218282227539 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127223639932 0.0743258471296 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343848391476 0.0701772020484 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136413914377 0.128457276422 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403802472411 0.0628817314937 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.3 14.3799401198 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 48.3550499002 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.1 12.197005988 263% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.32208582834 135% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 12.3882235529 222% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 11.1389221557 294% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 11.9071856287 277% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.