People today generall have better lives than people in the past did.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It’s often said that People who live in a modern age today always get a better life conditions than in the past had before . I agree with this view, but there still have some reason to say that the opinion which has been mentioned on this topic is not completely true for all of situations.
At First, Talk about the facilities that we have today from school equipments,medical theory to modern technology,ect…..it is obvious that they’re more convenient than in the past. For instance, nowadays if you wanna send a letter or to talk with someone who live far away, you just need a click and send a email to them or just make a phone call .Moreover there were many diseases that people in the past do not have the treatment to this , but in this high-tech medical age it is easy to get a good treatment to these diseases although there are some of that right now also do not have the treatment.In addiction, present-day we also have many benefitial equipment which support for our study stage.
In constrast,because of The improvements of our life,modernizations in many majors like education,technology,medical,… that leading to destruction of the environment on the earth.To contrusct modern buildings it’s obvious that we have to cut down tree to get the materials ,to exploit many other minerals which is destructing our natural environment , and that cause the greenhouse effect and the heating of our planet.
In conclusion, I believe that nowadays we absoluty have a better life than in the past but there are some aspects that we have to tackle,improve to make our life more and more effective
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89090909091 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44978281939 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534545454545 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.998228923 49.4020404114 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.166666667 106.682146367 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8333333333 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227529183709 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119326204923 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771743488116 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137715049364 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786418052704 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.