The bar chart compares the percentage of the cause of stress for different age groups in Canada

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The bar chart compares the percentage of the cause of stress for different age groups in Canada

The bar chart compares the percentage of the cause of stress for different age groups in Canada.
Looking at information for more details, we can see the most important causes of stress at age 75 and over with no particular reason. By contrast, the reason for working too much recorded the lowest figure.
The figures no particular reason were nearly two times as high as a reason for their health problems. For example, the number of people who have this stress was 10 percent at the age between 55 and 64. But the figures for age 75 and over were approximately double for the same reason.
The percentage was increased dramatically at the highest percent for no reason. The stress by working too much was even less likely to experience problems which were 3 percent for this reason.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37446808511 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87969114586 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6920771661 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2142857143 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285811818511 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941954042847 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753012873969 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172724661627 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406372190361 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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