the bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in canada.
The bar chart provides information about the most crucial culprits that lead to stress for distinct age brackets in Canada.
Overall, it is evident that most of the people of all age range living in Canada suffer from pressure for no particular reason, followed by the figure for that of own health problems. Meanwhile, slightly less tension is put on Canadians who lack money and spending a huge amount of time working.
In terms of the most prevalent causes of stress, it is to blame for the proportion of no particular reason and own health problem. As can be seen, people age 75 and over always rank top, at exactly 35% and approximately 25 % respectively with regard to the pressure in their lives in two different categories, namely no particular reason and own health problem. It is clear that the 65-74 age bracket that accounts for over a third and practically 10 % for no particular reason and own health problem, which doubles that of the middle age group ( 55-64), at just over 15 % and 10 % respectively. Meanwhile, the younger age bracket of people ( 25-54) is the smallest contribution of two distinct motives of stress.
By contrast, the percentages of overworking and lacking money show a reverse pattern with the highest proportion belong to people whose age is 25-54 at 25 % and 15% respectively. a similar pattern is seen with elderly people, who are the least affected by overwork, only 1%. People who are 25-54 years old are also worried about money the most, with 15%, 2% higher than 55-64 age group, double 65-74 group, and 5 times as much as the figure of 75+ age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62896607448 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2132396686 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284823790436 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11715853883 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961694081636 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193101300215 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855633446551 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.