Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
On the one hand, those who support learning business courses through educational institute say that it offers a number of benefits ranging from having an opportunity to learn from a research-based knowledge in order to develop professional skills by the guidance of trained tutor to securing the desired career by achieving jobs which require qualified business students. Besides, they claim that if one is getting business education by the University, can be able to learn all the tactics, subjects and implications of a theory which a good entrepreneur require. Recent trend of demanding qualified MBA from a well-known institute in terms of getting good jobs seem to bear testimony to this view.
Conversely, however, people who support that learning business skill by getting experience point to achieving the practical experience of dealing in the real world of business which can boost the outcome of the business. For example, learning from the mistake of your rival attributed to making a sensible decision in your own business. Moreover, they think that it is by gaining experience from working with relatives or doing internships will groom the business skills of a person.
Overall, it appears to me that the stronger argument is in favour of studying business courses in the educational institution, with all the advantages of learning from scratch to establish a business and take it to its peak which a person can not learn by just experiences. After all, becoming a successful entrepreneur should be one’s priority, not only learning but achieving good business skills and know-how to implement that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, conversely, however, if, moreover, so, well, after all, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29343629344 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93504869045 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555984555985 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0812087821 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.375 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135380563307 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714200312804 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327411678075 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977642810302 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459343758578 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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