Living in large cities today poses many problems for people.
What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?
Nowadays, who does not think about escaping from the large city to a smaller or to a country side? In fact a lot of people do, many researchers prove it. This happens because life in a metropolitan or large city causes many problems and issues for people which they have to struggle with.
Particularly, living in a big city affects people negatively in most ways. The first problem is bad ecology which is linked to gas emissions, contaminated water, and air pollution. This is a base for developing different diseases, sometimes life
threatening, sometimes just causing bad feeling. The next challenge is lack of time and stress caused by hustle and bustle, because citizens most of the time are overwhelmed and the places are overcrowded. The one of the main problems of the modern world is loneliness, related to not only big city life, but the rising role of digital technology too. Finally, expensive housing is the important fact which defines living in a big city.
Solutions for the problem listed above are linked with developing smaller cities for well-being life, thus people would want to move into them and would understand that life in a small city could satisfy as much as in a bigger one. It means to create a good infrastructure, optimize the urban zone, for example, make it comfortable for resting or for driving a bicycle. The next step should be improving the social field that all citizens would feel support by authorities . Building a modern housing stock has value too, in case people do not want to spend a lifetime in ugly old houses and want to have all main facilities nearby. Economy of the city needs to be strengthened in order employees have a high salary and would not refuse from anything they want trying to save money. All these actions could be provide only with government support, so that means people in charge have the most influence on the decision about living in a smaller city.
In conclusion, it seems that living in a large city has indeed a lot of challenges and problems for a calm happy life. But there are solutions which can help people, who cannot bear this pace, to make the right choice for them and to move to a small nice city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7265625 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57498638824 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528645833333 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0907275562 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.764705882 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312915078653 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975464808974 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761114557066 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177505927197 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613742720276 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.