Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you
Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.
You should write et least 150 words
You don't need to write your own address
begin Your letter as follow
Dear ...
Dear Stan
I am writing to you because my English teacher has given me your contact details regarding the penfriend advertisement.
My name is Carlos Becerra, I'm 31 years old, I live in Santiago. I have been working for a sports magazine over the last two years. Despite my profession as a chemical engineer, sports have always been my real passion. So, after five years of working for an oil company, I decided to follow my dreams and become a sports writer. I wasn't sure of making the right call at the time.
I enjoy playing sports in my free time. I love playing football once or twice a week, also, I play squash at least once a month. But, nevertheless, go cycling is what I enjoy the most. I think is the most beautiful sport in the world. Watching the tour of France's final stage at champs Elysee is one of my biggest dreams I hope one day I will be able to fulfill it.
Enough about me. I would like to hear from you. Where you from, what you like to do in your free time. Any interesting hobbies I should know?. Anyway, I am really looking forward to your reply.
All the best
Carlos B.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ity of Chile. I have been working for a sports magazine over the last five years. Desp...
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Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ecided to follow my dreams and became a sports writer. I enjoy reading books as lon...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, look, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35922330097 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36463082382 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635922330097 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4995161534 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.8235294118 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1176470588 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259712476267 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077499345119 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112284089542 0.0603063233224 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187907103962 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150976950117 0.0580467560999 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.