The graph below shows predictions about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030.
The given line graph highlights data about projections learner's who will learn three foreign languages,namely English,Spanish and Mandarin,over a decade from 2020 to 2030.The number of students will be estimated in millions.
Overall,what stands out from the graph is that there will be considerable upward trends in the studying of all languages the time covered by the graph.Another interesting point is that by 2028, the number of students of Mandarin will have caught up with residents of Spanish.
Looking at the details,as regards English learners will start at about 600 million students in 2020, then there will have been a slight improve to 700 million until 2024.It will dip marginally by 90 million students in 2026 and recover to 700 million till 2030.With respect to Spanish and Mandarin, it is predicted that the trend will be similar.Having increased just under 300 million people in 2022, then it will have levelled off by 2024. Next, it will be growing gradually year by year for 6 year between 2024 and 2030.As for Mandarin, learners will begin with 100 million at the start.Following this, the figure will go up significantly to 300 million students in 2024.Subsequently, results of learning language of Mandarin will have risen to 500 million till 2030.English will have attracted a large number of learners throughout the year,both at the beginning and at the end of the year.
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...light improve to 700 million until 2024.It will dip marginally by 90 million stude...
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...26 and recover to 700 million till 2030.With respect to Spanish and Mandarin, it is ...
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...redicted that the trend will be similar.Having increased just under 300 million people...
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...y year for 6 year between 2024 and 2030.As for Mandarin, learners will begin with ...
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...n till 2030.English will have attracted a large number of learners throughout the year,both at th...
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...e number of learners throughout the year,both at the beginning and at the end of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then, as for, as regards, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0953852207 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 22.4926829268 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.212274697 43.030603864 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.0 112.824112599 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 22.9334400587 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.75 5.23603664747 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249674868484 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169661176319 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463823217554 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191982488519 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375216434838 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 13.2329268293 237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.9970731707 226% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.