Directors and managers of organisations are often older people. Some people say that it is better for younger people to be leaders.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past few years, there has been an unprecedented rise in the number of young leaders. An increasing number of experts have claimed that young people as leaders might not be capable enough to compete with the giants in their backyards. In my opinion, age should not be the only factor to consider while opting for a managerial position. As long as, youth leaders are able to perform the job in a better way than their counterparts, CEOs should consider them for leadership positions.
Youth leaders are usually up to date in their respective fields, and in touch with the modern world. Secondly, they are always open to new ideas and ready to implement achievable ones. Moreover, they are up for learning new skills whenever required. Thirdly, they are more healthy and prepared to work round the clock, due to this they inspire their team member to become workaholics. Last but not the least, they are lifelong learners which makes them proficient and high potential individuals in their corresponding sphere.
On the other hand, old age leaders have real-life experience and deep knowledge on the matter, as a result of which they are able to cope with the situation in the best possible way. Lastly, they have much more sense of responsibility than their fellow mates.
To recapitulate, considering the aforementioned points, I believe that although it is a tradition for generations to have directors and managers of every organization as old age people, as long as youth leaders are performing better in terms of every aspect of the job, CEO’s should give them the opportunity to work as their organization leaders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, third, thirdly, while, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06227106227 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.787042741 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578754578755 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8919958264 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106687533138 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359722738857 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041302746227 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632386851656 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477494339665 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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