Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that women should get the same payment if taking the same task as men? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your opinion.
It has been long discussed whether or not women should get the same payment if taking the same task as man. Some people may disagree with this statement. However, in my opinion, it is crucially important for women to have the same treatment as man. The following are reasons for my stance on this subject.
First and foremost, women take the same payment as man, increasing their effectiveness on work. According to the latest survey conducted by a well-known psychology magazine, 97 percent of women think that having a fair payment can make them work more effectively. Take my personal experience for example, as a woman, I believed that women have good ability to work just like man. Therefore, if the women take less payment than man, which have the same task, it is unequal. Therefore, those behaviors will lead to decrease their motivation and energy on working.
In addition, if women are more willing to work since they get the same payment, it can help companies enhance their economic development. By having the equal treatment as man, women are more willing to join work. It is extremely common that different genders have different thinking patterns. Through the connection with different genders, they can cooperate and exchange their ideas with each other. As a result, it is beneficial for companies to increase their economic and the effectiveness of work.
To sum up, judging from the points elaborated in the previous paragraphs. Because having the same treatment as man can not only increase work effectiveness but also enhance the economy of the company, that is why I think women should take the same payment if they are taking the same task as man.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95035460993 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6457227939 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507092198582 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7967085277 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285503708498 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10590963022 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101505496504 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210928485635 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096773851713 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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