The graph below shows avarage carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the UK Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

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The graph below shows avarage carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The line chart illustrates the average CO2 each person produced in 4 countries in EU (the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal) in the period 1967 - 2007.
In the general , it is clear that there was a gradual increase in the amount of CO2 emissions in Italy and Portugal, while the opposite was witnessed in the UK and Sweden. Beside, the emission of carbon dioxide in the UK always stayed at the highest figure, Portuguese produced the lowest carbon dioxide over a period of 40 years.
In 1967, each person in Portugal emitted about 1.6 metric tonnes CO2. This figure increased gradually over the years and hit a peak of approximately 5.7 metric tonnes in 2007. A similar trend happened in Italy, the amount of CO2 started off at around 4.1 metric tonnes, rising moderately and hitting a peak of 7.8 metric tonnes at the end of the period.
In the UK, the amount of emmited CO2 per person began at roughly 10.7 metric tonnes in 1967, decreasing gradually thoughout the years and hitting a lowest point of nearly 9 metric tonnes in 2007. A considerable fluctuation was experienced in Sweden, after hitting the highest point of about 10.5 metric tonnes in 1977 from around 9 metric tonnes in 1967, the figure dropped considerably and finally hit a record low of around 5 metric tonnes in 2007.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the period 1967 - 2007. In the general , it is clear that there was a gradual in...
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Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...adually thoughout the years and hitting a lowest point of nearly 9 metric tonnes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69911504425 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51229662839 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486725663717 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3784306752 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254792385594 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136509251725 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806580866317 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183809904567 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742099025166 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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