You have stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and forgot your watch there. Write a letter:
To him/her and say Thank him/her for the weekend stay.
Describe your watch and where you could have left it.
Suggest a way how to get it back.
Dear Roya,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to thank you for your warm and friendly hospitability. It was really enjoyable spending my weekend at your lovely house. It makes me laugh once I imagine you telling story about your boss.
Perhaps you may noticed by now that I left my watch, actually my dear watch, at your house. I vividly remember that I opened it when we were talking in the kitchen and put it on your washing machine. I hope it was still there. Please check your kitchen as soon as getting home if you did not see so far.
If you find it, hopefully, I would really appreciate it if you could send it by a taxi. As you know, that watch is really valuable for my, and I cannot go a day without it. Tomorrow I will be at home as I have a day off. Please let me know if you can arrange sending it.
Once again, thank you for your warm hospitability. Hope seeing you soon.
Best wishes,
Yalda.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Roya, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty. Hope seeing you soon. Best wishes, Yalda.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, may, really, so, still, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24293785311 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28048522265 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.66761903 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.0666666667 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301899905732 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999253704991 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667039205436 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195002880708 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356537961535 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.42 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.23 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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