Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
During the last decades, postponing pregnancy to the latest year of marriage has become a controversial subjects of debate. There are a number of causes for this decision which will be discussed before pores and cons are drawn.
To begin with, it should be noted that in today’s life, the priorities of people have been changed in comparison with our grandparents. Higher education, for example, is one of the main targets of young generations. The growing number of people with Ph.D degree is a convincing evidence which can be seen in many societies. Furthermore, excelling at career is another example of different priority. On the other hand, financial issue play a vital role in this regard. Many of young couples have to struggle with several difficulties. For instance, making loan to provide themselves with home or daily necessities.
Obviously, this alarming trend poses some benefits and drawbacks as well. As an advantage, providing time to make progress or pursuing their personal goals is a considerable point. Also, saving money would be another benefit, especially for those couples who are not affluent or are not able to afford the costs of having a baby. Although, delaying this decision bring a new concern which is the rising gap generation. This problematic situation can cause weak bonds between parent and children. However, I believe that with some remedies this problem can be mitigated.
In conclusion, considering all mentioned points, it seems that there are some culprits that trigger people to decide have infants later. Despite the increased gap between parent and children, I think the number of advantages are more. Given this situation, it appears that content parents who followed their dreams and achieved their goals are better than those parents who scarified themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26804123711 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75825807787 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0425401059 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18661709044 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490846334412 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461920178261 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103691134312 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731495916976 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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