Nowadays, people believe that the environment influences their accomplishments. Some people think their success and accomplishment were influenced by the places where they grew up. Do you think the environment does or does not affect people’s accomplishment and how it affects? Please give an example of a famous person to support your statement.
There is no doubt that the environment does affect people's accomplishments. Some people point that environment does affect people’s accomplishments, some other people believe that environment does not affect people’s accomplishments. Personally speaking, I firmly agree that the environment can change people's accomplishments, which can be supported by the reasons as follows.
The first and most important reason for my belief is that people will be more social. To be more specific, when a human is born in a big family, they will consist of lots of people, so they will know how to socialize with other people. This can be proved by a recent study by Oxford University, which stated that 71% of people grew up in a big family.
On the other hand, the second reason for this argument is that people can learn more in a good environment. To be more specific, when kids study in a good school, they will get a good education. According to the annual report by the Australian government, more than 86% of people want to give better education to their children.
With all the points above, the conclusion can be made that environment does affect people's accomplishment, because of social reason and education reason.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0197044335 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05288387892 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532019704433 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7664240378 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.9 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278835783423 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130917915543 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117290588795 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171293770118 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107620835294 0.0609392437508 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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