People these days are less fit than they used to be. Explain the possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
Many people have become out of shape these days as a result of the modern lifestyle. The unhealthy food and the less practicing of exercises are the main causes for that. These can be tackled by consuming healthy food and exercising regularly.
Firstly, since people are doing less exercise, they have ruined their bodies. They own cars, so they are barely moving. Continuously they are using the elevators than using stairs. They are working for long times daily, but they are not practicing any sports as it is quite important for their health and bodies. If people are getting more developed tools, they have to practice more sports. They will let their hearts beat more, so the extra fats in their bodies will be burnt. Thus, they will be in shape.
Secondly, people are suffering from obesity because they are fully dependent on fast-food. They have bad nutrition which, is necessary for a healthy body. So they do not get enough minerals and vitamins. Also, the addition of harmful artificial compounds that are added to the food like colors, smell, and taste. According to that, they have to follow a suitable regime. Rich with various essential vitamins to the body. The diversity of food resources would help the long use and increase the fitness of the body. Also, increase the awareness of people, especially children, of the dangers of fast and non-organic food.
In conclusion, people should get armed with sports and healthy affluent food and avoid the lack of exercising and unhealthy food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96456692913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40346188929 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3320608672 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.3684210526 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3684210526 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236146220037 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767033308558 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049476234615 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128896929884 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070246269306 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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