An English-speaking friend has written to ask you for help in arranging accommodation in your town / city when they visit next month. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
give details of some accommodation you think is suitable for him/her
suggest what your friend should bring with them
recommend some places for him/her to visit on the trip
Dear Savi,
I hope this letter finds you in pink health and really and spirit. It’s been a while since I wrote, but I received your letter dear you mentioned that you are planning to move in my city. After reading that I was over the cloud nine and on the very next day I start finding an accommodation according to your requirement, luckily, I find one. In relation to the specific of the flat, the blokes have spacious living room with well furnished kitchen and two rooms that I think is perfect for you.
I know you are thinking of the desired item so I want to let you know that you don’t have to pack anything except your attires and necessary documents because everything is being provided there. In fact, we will approach any shopping centre for anything you need later.
Anyway, don’t bother much because I will be there for you.The way, there are numerous tourist places that I recommend you to explore during your expedition such as P answer. I don’t feel hesitate if you want to get any information.
I am waiting eagerly to catch up soon.
Your lovingly,
Sakshi
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-08 | sakshi2424 | 73 | view |
| 2020-10-21 | Rohith | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...er much because I will be there for you.The way, there are numerous tourist places ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, really, so, well, while, i think, in fact, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58974358974 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42909170721 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6402637052 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269211533833 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983242593369 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438119075123 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131451064208 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852706596084 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.