The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by izzatbek on Tue, 12/15/2020 - 07:47

Using the metro on a day to day basis is necessary for some people because it is their primary source of transportation to travel from one place to another to disregard the traffic jams caused by pedestrians and other private and public vehicle. So, the metro is one of the commonly used mode of transportation in the whole world. Focusing on the major subway system in Europe, the London Underground has the longest path period with a distance of 408 km long. While the Moscow Metro and Paris Metro only have a distance of 300 km and 214 km long respectively.Followed by the Paris Metro that is ranging up to 4.5 million people given that it has the least path period and has the most figure of stations. Lastly, 3 million people use the London Underground even though it has the greatest distance in the path period and just a little bit behind by the figure of stations compared to the Paris Metro.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 561, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Followed
... of 300 km and 214 km long respectively.Followed by the Paris Metro that is ranging up t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 830, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... distance in the path period and just a little bit behind by the figure of stations compar...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54601226994 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74316151087 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8141050239 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.2 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00703042124986 0.215688989381 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00506870160481 0.103423049105 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0101374032096 0.0843802449381 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00703042124986 0.15604864568 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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