You rent an apartment and recently a new tenant moved in above you. This tenant’s behaviour is causing you a lot of problems. Write a letter to your landlord. In you letter
Describe what the new tenant is doing
Explain why it is disturbing you so much
Tell your landlord what you would like him/her to do about it
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding the new tenant who rented the apartment last week.
As you know, the new tenant is a college undergraduate. He has been organizing weekend parties which run all right even on weekdays. This is exacerbated by two big dogs with the constant sound of their paws and feet.
This became a problem when my clients started complaining about it. My office work requires me to take the phone and video calls with the offshore management team. Such seamlessly loud noise making the meeting difficult to take part in. Although I have tried to convey this convenience to him, he refused to co-operate.
I would request you to please ask the society management to release an official notice to remind the tenant about the loud-music and pet policies. If he continues to do so, you can ask him to relocate to other residential areas.
Yours sincerely,
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r residential areas. Yours sincerely, Apoorva Chikara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98101265823 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79056511217 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.73417721519 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2475894323 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5454545455 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250409760422 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084084531732 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104109530309 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142558688035 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698426169723 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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