You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building.
Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 254 words.
Smoking is a personal activity and who do not smoke they always prefer smoke free areas. For this purpose, most of the countries banned smoking inside the public buildings. Now, question arise here that this phenomenon is fair for people who smoke or no? I totally share my opinion with the statement.
To begin with, lets discuss about the thinking way of people who want smoke free places. According to them, smoking is injurious for all including that person who is smoking and he is creating smoky environment for everyone whosever is around him. Therefore, they fully support the idea of banning inhale of cigeratte in various places such as shopping malls and community centers. Also, this can affect the view of children after watching such activities in negative manner and for sure they can indulge themselves into smoking.
On the other hand, it can be biased for those who can not stay without cigar. They might have habit of doing this after little time and avoiding it can cause problems for them. Hence, sometimes it may be emergency for them to exhale vapor and leaving building for this is against their human rights to do whatever they want. So, smoking can be legalized by creating separate smoking room inside the building where anyone can do smoking.
In a nutshell, making smoking illegal would be beneficial for all to some extent, however, there are many alternative ways to solve this issue. Government can create separate rooms for those who love to smoke which will be fair with everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, may, so, therefore, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88372093023 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33359085859 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2335229226 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202552707794 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844677061401 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564758387656 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142521295405 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513011059644 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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