Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that it is beneficial.
To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?
Indisputably, globalization has set a new ground for the interchangeable patterns between cultures, economy, ..etc as bit by bit in the contemporary affair. Thus, majority claims it as cut and dried. others transiently oppose the trend owing to various worth-considered aspects. From my perspective, I will dive into this commotion and illustrate the exploitative facts of each cropped-up statement.
On the flip hand, globalization plausibly had set the case for the exertion of detrimental impact on, such as, culture. Alarmingly, minor and susceptible cultural patterns are being devastated due to the overload exchange and irrigation among nations. By adversely adapting novel walks of other cultures, least-preserved traditions were to be left off. Nonetheless, the diversity of namely distinguished culture is highlighted intrinsic. another instance can be accounted for is the economy. The triumphing-over perception of every nations has lead the world become the battle ground for expanded thriving. Hence, the established distinction cropped up dividing into two classes: developed and underdeveloped. Subsequently, those developed grabbed the dominance to play against the others degrading them in escapable race.
On the other hand, nevertheless, every coin has two sides. The globalization has provided the altogether community to support and back up one another. Were there no irrigation, number of crises striking the world could not be partially eliminated. A very honorable worth-mentioned exemplars can be credited to the co-operation of countries during Covid-19 pandemic. providing aid to heavily striken community, the crisis has been laid down effectively. As thing went on, it is predicted that the predicament ought to be eradicated as the time being.
In conclusion, the pros and cons of globalization are to be throughoutly considered. Its potential should not be amplified and its drawbacks should not be carelessly regarded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74137931034 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45831125924 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668965517241 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.439506425 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.25 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079934017684 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0221995982156 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308338424043 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047278713142 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00911142600925 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.42 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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