It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car , a television and a fridge. Do the disadvantage of this development for society outright the advantages?
Compare to yesteryear's now the wish of every person is to have their car, television and refrigerator. These devices become a basic necessity for people in today's era. In my opinion, I believe that this can brings more problems for society in the long run contrast with the advantage.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of having their car, television and refrigerator. Firstly, these things can make people live better and easier. Refrigerator help to store food so it does not get spoil and people can eat food. For instance, people like mangoes but it is not available in all seasons except summer but with the help of this device they can store the pulp of mangoes and can consume whenever they wish to eat. Similarly, Car is indispensable as it saves our precious time as well as in this 21st century having a car is a symbol of status. Secondly, Television plays an essential role today, it is a source of knowledge and entertainment as there are a plethora of channels available on television due to which people can broaden their horizon. Apart from this, it helps people to take a breakthrough monotonous work and one can get relaxation and fun from this.
Nevertheless, despite the advantage above, I believe that there are numerous drawbacks of owing car, television, and fridge. First and foremost demerit is pollution. As car emits the carbon dioxide gas and other greenhouse gases, it creates a dangerous impact on the environment. In the same way, Refrigerator contains CFC's and HCFCs, which are a cooling agent inside that and having dire consequences for our ozone layer. To vindicate, a recent survey shows large hole ozone in the northern pole. In addition to it, due to these types of poisonous gases person health gets affected, it arises a problem such as irritation of eyes, throat, dizziness and many other health issues. In contrast, Television, also have some disadvantages. Chiefly, owing to this, today children we're not focusing on their studies and waste time by watching their favourite channels. Furthermore, it creates a major health problem namely, obesity, heart disease, diabetes and many more.
In recapitulation, although, having a personal car, television and fridge have some merits. However.it has more demerits for people as owing to these devices badly impact the health of a person as well as on the education of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
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Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gases'' or 'gas's'?
Suggestion: gases'; gas's
... to it, due to these types of poisonous gases person health gets affected, it arises ...
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Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...television and fridge have some merits. However.it has more demerits for people as owin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03535353535 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80059499268 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54797979798 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5676553141 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9523809524 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7619047619 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208380063999 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626056079663 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620053901621 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142773538213 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352646511164 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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