Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others think that some information is too important and too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
According to the statement, some people think that it is beneficial to share information and ideas in scientific research as well as in academic and business sectors. On contrast, other masses believe that some information become too essential and valuable which is shared freely. In my opinion, the former idea is more supportive and both the views are explained in the paragraphs below.
To begin with, there are few reasons which shows that , to share information related to scientific as well as academic world become good because this leads to some benefits. First of all, if people exchange their ideas in all skills in which they work, then it become go towards their progression. For instance, many companies and MNCs in business sector are set up in India by foreign countries because they work together and share their ideas with each other. Due to this, their productivity level are going towards peak day by day which leads to development of economy of both the countries like two to tango.
on contrary, according to some masses and I personally believe that it is more valuable to share information about anything freely because this leads to plethora of benefits to all. First and foremost reason behind this is trends which are going on in contemporary settings such as internet. in today's modern era, internet become a part of life of all masses and they all become netizens. If, countries shared this technology with each other, therefore this technology become beneficial for all today and also change the life style of people. Moreover, sharing information also leads to converse of the thoughts of people from narrow minded thinking. For instance, foreign countries share their cultural information with other nations also and due to this, all countries now become modern and western and change their opinions especially towards women. Because, after adapting western culture, the discrimination and inequality between men and women become demolished.
To conclude, according to my outlook, sharing of information freely is more valuable because this gives great outcomes to all and also to society and a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15561959654 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65533878913 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489913544669 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6511540952 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.266666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2892655364 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115672992109 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115954348369 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221042119697 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125916002123 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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