You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar.
Write a letter to your colleague who is the person in charge of the seminar and ask for:
Detailed information regarding the dates
Program schedule
Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups
Dear Mr. Clark,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in the business management workshop organized by you and want to know details pertaining to it.
I am acquainted that the seminar would commence from next week and is for a couple of days. However, I would like to ask precisely the dates of different activities and their timings as I along with four other team members would come with each other to attend the sessions.
Furthermore, the email about the seminar does not include information about the different pursuits on separate days. Therefore, we want to know about the programmes with topics covered so that we can decide which discussion we want to enrol for and appear for the activity accordingly.
Moreover, we are curious to know about the charges for this intrinsic workshop and also the price of individual sessions as well. Besides, I would request you to avail a discount for us as we are a group of five people joining together. I would appreciate an attractive concession offered to us.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Chirag Bhardwaj
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| 2021-01-05 | Chirag Bhardwaj | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92513368984 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68830289613 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5193167657 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232403430953 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840197371152 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03217494206 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100290084039 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035998266475 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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