The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, the internet has become an integral part of our lives and helps us live easier and more convenient. From the perspective of some people, with the spread of information on the internet, there is no need to travel to other foreign countries to learn about other nations’ ways of living. While I accept that using The internet is beneficial for broadening our knowledge about other countries’ culture and traditions, I still believe that traveling still is the best means to understand other cultures.
On the one hand, the internet provides easy access to wider information sources, such as online libraries, online newspapers, online journals, and etc. Therefore, people could easily enter the keywords and find the information they want at minimal cost or for free. So, the internet endows people with the ability to acquire vast knowledge about other nations ‘ cultures and traditions. Furthermore, not all people are wealthy enough to afford potentially constly international traveling. So the internet provides a great opportunity for them to see the world in the comfort of home.
On the other hand, whereas the internet is full of credible, engaging, and exciting information sources about cultures and heritage of other nationalities, it also may contain misguided knowledge about other countries. For example, most western media always try to portray Iran as one of the most dangerous countries in the world. However, the majority of foreign tourists who visited iran concede that Iran is a magnificent country with the most well-coming people in the world. Moreover, a journey to other countries provides visitors with amazing and unforgettable experiences, such as attending traditional festivals and religious ceremonies, visiting museums and other historical places, wearing costumes, buying souvenirs, which allow travelers to get in-depth knowledge about foreign cultures and traditions.
In conclusion, although the internet facilitates earning information about different cultures, I believe traveling will remain the best way to understand people who are different from us.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...es, online newspapers, online journals, and etc. Therefore, people could easily enter th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (iran) must be used with a third-person verb: 'concedes'.
Suggestion: concedes
...ty of foreign tourists who visited iran concede that Iran is a magnificent country with...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56037151703 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92139346429 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575851393189 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9999544834 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.153846154 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239639010041 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085764405537 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548481883991 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150476207308 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689270493545 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...es, online newspapers, online journals, and etc. Therefore, people could easily enter th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (iran) must be used with a third-person verb: 'concedes'.
Suggestion: concedes
...ty of foreign tourists who visited iran concede that Iran is a magnificent country with...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56037151703 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92139346429 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575851393189 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9999544834 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.153846154 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239639010041 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085764405537 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548481883991 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150476207308 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689270493545 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.