The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions measured in millions of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make co

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The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the acid rain gases resulting from four different sectors from 1990 to 2007 in the United Kingdom. Overall, there was a decrease in the amount of acid rain emissions over the period in all sectors shown apart from transport and communication, where it remained fairly constant. In addition, the most dramatic fall was found in the sector of electricity, gas and water supply.

In 1991, around 3.3 million tonnes of acid rain gases were discharged from gas, electricity and water supplies. Just above 2 million tonnes of acid rain gases resulted from other industries. Transport and communication was responsible for approximately 0.7 million tonnes of emissions, while the domestic sector produced about 0.6 million tonnes.
There was a dramatic decline in the amount of acid rain emissions coming from gas, electricity and water supplies, which fell to just 0.5 million tonnes in 2007. Emissions from domestic and other industries sectors also dropped gradually, reaching about 0.2 and 1.2 million tonnes respectively at the end of the period. In contrast, the transport sector saw a small increase in acid rain emissions, reaching a peak of 1 million tonnes in 2005 then falling to 0.6 million tonnes in 2007.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while, apart from, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2039800995 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74470898101 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517412935323 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8637291152 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.222222222 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294376018902 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145827778911 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061334874814 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222404272254 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01857083413 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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