You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority.
In your letter, you should tell:
• explain how you knew about the plans
• describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighbourhood
• suggest a possible solution to the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I, Noah K., am a resident of Dwarika and I am writing this letter to notify a probable problem which may take place as a consequence of the new development by the government resulting into multiple problems.
I have a friend in the government aviation department through whom I came across the sure plans of an airport being constructed in the south-west of the city near Dwarika. Although such a decision will prove fruitful for the residents but it may raise some issues in the locality.
The place selected for the airport construction results into manifold problems. One being traffic congestion, having an airport will add on to the traffics not just during rush hours but it would then be round the clock. Other problem is the disturbance to the residents nearby since the neighbourhood not only includes a residency area but also a school and an old-age home and the people associated will suffer the highest since it will bring a lot of chaos.
Instead of having it in the aforementioned place, I think the best place is on to the other side of the city as the area there is not utilised much and the airport will make a good use of it. Though the land rates are a little hiked there but considering the above problems I suppose it is the most convenient option.
I look forward to taking my appeal to a senior level so such a huge problem can be solved even before it arises. Expecting a prompt action.
Thank you,
Yours faithfully,
Noah K.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you, Yours faithfully, Noah K.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, i suppose, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62121212121 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64965302578 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0444529971 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114805141479 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475101268649 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685386889906 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0384598371357 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291366743289 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.