Artificial sweetener
In this set of material,reading and lecture was both about Sucralose, an artificial sweetner, the writer strongly postulates that people use Sucralose for weight loss that posit dangerous impacts on human health, and provides three reasons to endorse it's idea. On the other hand, the lecturer mentions that studies have shown that particular sweetner is extremely safe and could be used for weight loss, and gainsays each of arguments from the reading.
First and foremost, the writer begins by asserting that Scientific research has shown that sucralose use has caused the shrinkage of mice thymus, therefore its is not safe for humans to use that weetner. The lecturer dismisses that point by insisting that when the study performed on was closely monitored, it was discovered that only taking high concerntration of sucralose results in damage to thymus. He exemplify that the dose of 4000 packets per day for about a month would have serious consequnces otherwise its not harmful.
Furthermore, the speakers contradicts the organochlorine comment by pointing out that though many other organochlorine compounds could cause toxic effect as they absorbs in the stomach and stored in the fatty tissue, it is not toxic to use sucralose. Since it does not digest efficiently in digestive tract and does nor build up in fats. these claims clearly refutes the writer implication that because sucralose in copmounded with chlorine, it would be toxic to plants and humans.
Ultimately, the writer wraps its arguments by stating that replacing artifical sweetner would not help to reduce weight as people are indulged to eat sweet and sugery stuff after eating sweetner. Consequently, they gain more weight. Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes an issue with that by cotending that unlike other sweetners sucralose does not break up after heating. Hence, people can continue using them in their baking soch as cakes and cookies. Moreover they can keep their diet on track too by that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reading
In this set of material,reading and lecture was both about Sucralose, a...
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Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'exemplifies'.
Suggestion: exemplifies
...cralose results in damage to thymus. He exemplify that the dose of 4000 packets per day f...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'absorb'
Suggestion: absorb
...pounds could cause toxic effect as they absorbs in the stomach and stored in the fatt...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ffect as they absorbs in the stomach and stored in the fatty tissue, it is not to...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ve tract and does nor build up in fats. these claims clearly refutes the writer impli...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...utes the writer implication that because sucralose in copmounded with chlorine, i...
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Line 4, column 454, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...their baking soch as cakes and cookies. Moreover they can keep their diet on track too b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 319.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2131661442 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73600734388 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 145.348785872 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601880877743 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6973168517 49.2860985944 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.923076923 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 21.698381199 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0195208369704 0.272083759551 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00565288999935 0.0996497079465 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.019582185377 0.0662205650399 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0127412155263 0.162205337803 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220684326418 0.0443174109184 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 63.6247240618 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.7273730684 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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