Write a letter to retailer to complain in the letter explain.
1 why you are unhappy?
2 Request a refund
3 And make arrangements to return the damaged items.
Dear Sir,
Recently, I bought a new Samsung mobile phone from your store. I did not open the box at your store as it was a gift for my wife and I took the sealed gift wrapped box home. I wanted to surprise her with this gift because her old handset was not functioning properly. I was very shocked and embarrassed when my wife opened her gift and the mobile inside the box had some cracks on its display and the device was not switching on. Let me tell you, I am very displeased with this situation. It seems your store sold me a used device inside a new box. It kind of practice will lower your market reputation.
Since the device, which was sold to me, is clearly not in a working order, I would like to return this phone and request a refund for this purchase. I would also like to make it very clear that I do not want a replacement. I would also like to get my refund either in cash or through cheque.
I will visit your store this coming Saturday to return this device along with all the accessories which were inside the box. In case your store is not opening on that day, please let me know in advance, so that we can make some other arrangements to return the device.
Hoping to hear from you regarding the above mentioned situation.
Yours Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d handset was not functioning properly. I was very shocked and embarrassed when m...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd either in cash or through cheque. I will visit your store this coming Satur...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32083333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2926172271 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545833333333 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7045101046 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7692307692 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0702687664302 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260989736395 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305775834242 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053979250221 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300705877223 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.