Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.
It is believed by few groups that cognitive skills are greatly improved while one participates in group activities. I completely agree with this notion and put my supporting view in upcoming paragraphs by giving specific examples.
To begin with, group work remove inferiority complex and help people to put forward their opinions. To be more clear, one can start conversation with the other like-minded people and will get to know more about their thoughts. As a result, clarity on a subject increases, for example, group projects when given in colleges every group ends up to develop something innovative. Therefore, their brain start functioning in different ways, which will ultimately helpful to the society in general. For instance, development of applications such as Facebook is come into existence through a practical assignment done in group work. Thus, group activities are indeed crucial to broadens one’s intelligence level.
Another important area where group play vital role is in sports by helping them to improve their focus and team spirit. Players starts learning from each other during the time of their play such as the right technique to run for an athlete and give a best shot for a cricketer. They are able to see one another, and less likely to make mistakes which one only learn in group paly. In addition to this, they also masters in strategy making and tactics to win a game with better coordination.
Hence, there are multiple things that a person would get to know by playing in a team.
In conclusion, after discussing how important is group activities is for a person, I am strongly agree that group interactions and work is essential for individuals learning and understanding.
Since it helps them to work on their brain, and let them think in every possible manner, which ultimately make people more intelligent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12459016393 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78588988975 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7253193549 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190816432403 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631699926419 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365198617085 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097259048447 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410871860767 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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