You are coming home late night and detained by police Department for a routine check (Petrol). The officer on duty behaved with you rudely.
Escalate the complaint to Police Commissioner about this incident.
In your letter
- Introduce yourself
- Describe what happend
- Say what you want Police Commissioner to do for you
Dear Mr Smith,
I am Mr Shreyas Parab, resident of Indralok Bhayander East. I travel across the country for the profession, and many times I disembark at the airport late at night.
Recently, at 01.00 am on the 15th of April, police detained me near S.K. Stone signal while driving back home from the airport. I showed them all the required documents, but officer Mr Sam misbehaved and spoke vulgar. He started asking for additional proofs, which are of no concern, moreover, he collected my driving license and car keys. My vehicle was checked twice and made me halt for one hour without any obligations.
I appreciate the work and ethics followed by the police department, but I request you to enquire about the incident and to check the video recordings near the signal and take necessary actions for the misconducts of officers.
Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94193548387 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62689206377 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703225806452 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3395829672 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197797320133 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733818927804 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063923710772 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127822444869 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578519592227 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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