Many children these days have their own mobile phones. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it.
It is true that the use of cell phones has been increased by kids since last decade. This essay will explicate its advantages and disadvantages.
To commance with, there are several merits of using mobile phones by children. The predominant one is that, mobile phones are the boon for children. To explain it, it is essential equipment for the children to solve the complex problems of studies. Moreover, they could also be attached with world of various knowledge sharing websites and search engines. For example, the headline of 'The Moscow Times' revealed that 9 out of 10 toppers of oxford university in 2012 operated mobile phones for their study purpose. Thus, it is proved that mobile phones assist children to polish their skills.
On the other hand, their are numerous demerits of overuse of cell phones by children. First and foremost is that excessive use of cell phone could affect the academics of a child. To explicate it, children use mobile phones for entertainment and trivial activities like texting and surfing the internet, which could adversely affect to their studies. In addition to this, brighter screen of phones emit harmful rays into their eyes and sometimes their brain could also be damaged by exccesive use. For instance, a survay was conducted by WHO found that children face health hassels because they spend 72% of their quality time with cellphone. As a result, by overusing mobile phones pupils can face fatal diseases.
To conclude, although the mobile phones are a helpful gadget for children in emergency situation, the excessive usage of cell phones could adversely affect the body, brain and study of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97426470588 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42985225586 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 272.0 20.2975951904 1340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1353.0 106.682146367 1268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 272.0 20.7667163134 1310% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 115.0 7.06120827912 1629% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290974385709 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.290974385709 0.084324248473 345% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183809713449 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043093027335 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 138.0 13.0946893788 1054% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -204.6 50.2224549098 -407% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 109.4 11.3001002004 968% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.03 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.37 8.58950901804 249% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 110.8 10.1190380762 1095% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 111.0 10.7795591182 1030% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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