Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
Explain why the sports centre is important for the local community
Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir,
I am citizen living in ‘Uttara, sector-6’ area that falls under your council. I came to learn about your recent decision in closing the nearby sports and leisure centre named ‘Uttara Park’ in the face of financial crisis. ‘Uttara Park’ is the only leisure centre in this locality covering an area of 10,000 sq. km.
Being the single most leisure centre over the time a lot of facilities and varieties of free time activities including outdoor games, jogging area, food court, a small Cineplex etc have been incorporated to this center. This centre is very dear to me and family as we spent most of our free times in there. We meet with our friends and hangout and arrange different meet ups with near and dears ones. Over the time we have developed a lot of memories related to this centre.
As a part of outdoor activities there is a sports club and different tournaments are arranged in this place. Local people actively take part in the activities which strengthen community bonding. If this centre closes we are afraid that people will become self- centric. Local people will start facing mental and physical challenge as this centre gave us the room for some fresh air. Inhabitants on this community regularly gather for physical exercises which asserts a positive impact on everyone personal and social life.
As we know it is crucial for every community to have at least one central meeting place and for us this palce is the leisure centre. Please explore some other options to mitigate the existing crisis without closing down this leisure centre.
Thankfully yours,
Tabassum Zaman
On behalf of your council memebers
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir I am citizen living in Uttara sector6 ar...
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... different meet ups with near and dears ones Over the time we have developed a lot o...
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...a lot of memories related to this centre As a part of outdoor activities there is...
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...without closing down this leisure centre Thankfully yours Tabassum Zaman On be...
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...this leisure centre Thankfully yours Tabassum Zaman On behalf of your counci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 279.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81362007168 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3120530023 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 290.88556701 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 279.0 16.3608247423 1705% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1343.0 76.5299724578 1755% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 279.0 16.8248392259 1658% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 4.34317383033 507% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247864925927 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247864925927 0.0766984524023 323% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155736931582 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690780048762 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 140.7 8.37731958763 1680% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -203.25 70.7449484536 -287% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 110.9 7.45979381443 1487% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.87 7.59969072165 275% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 8.62886597938 637% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 113.6 8.54432989691 1330% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 111.0 8.15463917526 1361% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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