More and more people using internet now a days for their personal things such as shopping paying bills.Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that, the advent of technology has tremendous benefits in human beings life. In this day and age, the assistance of internet is taken by individuals to do shopping as well as to make the payment of bills such as, electricity bills, water bill and so on. This essay intends to discuss not only positives but also drawbacks which are associated with this phenomenon in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
Setting wheel to the motion, there are manifold advantages if this approach is used. First and foremost, individuals can save their invaluable time in this cut throat era by the use of modern inventions. To elaborate it, masses can perform their important tasks without any hurdle by paying their payments of bills and do shopping just in one click by sitting at home rather than go to that specific place and wait for long time. As a result, person can use their energy in any other task to enhance their productivity level in any field.For example, to study. Besides it, the another considerable benefit is that, civilians can avail high degree of discount since online shopping offers various kind of offers for example flash sale 30% off especially in the season of festivals.In addition to that,the comparisons can be made by masses among the available stock worldwide with the aid of applications like Amazon and purchase the one that suits to a person financially as well as according to the trend; therefore, individuals are using internet for these purposes.
However, on the flip side there are numerous disadvantages of this trend. Principally, if people use online applications in order to make payments, there might high of hacking personal details related to bank account while making payments. Hence, person may come in trouble or one can lose their savings which kept in bank due to any mistake. Furthermore, even if internet has ample of benefits, it leads to self isolation as individuals do whole work with help of internet instead of going outside. Thus, they loss their contact with society and peers which would be deleterious for an individual in future. What is more, problem of unemployment arises. To make it more clear, the workers who depend on these business units to earn their bread and butter will be counted in the job less category mainly local vendors. Consequently, the rise might be seen in criminal activities and robbery as well.
To recapitulate, although this trend has both advantages and disadvantages, I advocate that this phenomenon has more number of disadvantages as against to advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00702576112 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77273877931 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6018735363 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.210332435 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.764705882 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1176470588 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5294117647 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260836275021 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710206922008 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469063515218 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139888821955 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344813963502 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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